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Come Back to Me by =divisal:icondivisal:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Lyrical


VS
The trees have changed throughout the seasons
and I remember waiting...
for your car that afternoon.
Two dozen roses by the window
with a note that read ''I'm leaving''...
and that you'll pick up your stuff soon

PRE-CH
And now your gone.

Now our old friends are
calling out your name.

And I can't barely breathe without you here.

I know it sounds insane
but please don't go.

Please don't go...

CH
Cause I need you
and I miss you
and I want you
to hold me
and love me
just like you used to do
when we first fell in love.

Cause i'm dying
and i'm praying
and i'm hoping
that you will
love me once again.
Just like you did back than.

Come back to me.

VS
How quickly memories come find you.
It only seems like yesterday...
that we first fell in love.
So many miles you've put between us.
I hope you find your way...
back in my arms someday,

PRE-CH
But now your gone.

Now our old friends
are calling out your name.

And I can't barely breathe without you here.

I know it sounds insane
but please don't go.

Please don't go...

CH
Cause I need you
and I miss you
and I want you
to hold me
and love me
just like you used to do
when we first fell in love.

Cause i'm dying
and i'm prayin
and i'm hoping
that you will
love me once again.
Just like you did back than.

Come back to me.
©2003-2009 =divisal
:icondivisal:

Author's Comments

ok..i was submitting this under poetry in progress when the rest of it came to me..it was weird so anyway..yeah..here is the finished project..now i guess i'll sink back into my writers block..lol..i hope you guys like it..oh yeah..its not written in song form like my other ones..ya know..the VS-CH. thing..only because it'd be too confusing for me and you..lol..i just sing it like its written..all i know..is that i like it..and i' hope you all do too..:hug:

EDIT: I finally put VS, PRE-CH, and CH in the song. I finally figured out what exactly I wanted to do with it. Hence, the editing. :)

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~101gazza101 Sep 23, 2003, 9:38:00 AM
wicked,brill,exellent,outstanding etc etc its briliant cathy but u dosed of towards the end itold u to keep up the oj

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=divisal Sep 23, 2003, 9:39:34 AM
thnx, alex..:hug:

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''That which we manifest is before us...''
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~trep Sep 23, 2003, 10:16:16 AM
Mmk, yeah, I can't even find words. You'll have to sing this for me whenever we finally get together :)

:hug:

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You gave birth to a freak of nature. No sense treating him like one.
-- House
:icondivisal:
=divisal Sep 23, 2003, 10:19:30 AM
hee hee..thnx..hmm..we'll see about me singin it to ya..whenever that may be..:) ..

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''That which we manifest is before us...''
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~bob-x Sep 23, 2003, 10:27:27 AM
... oh, the good old broken hearts.

I love the feeling and flow. You right the most beautiful songs, they have music even in silence when I read them to myself. Keep up the magnificent work.

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~bob-x / aka / Arthur
:icondivisal:
=divisal Sep 23, 2003, 10:29:08 AM
:)..thank you so much..i love it when you comment..you always make my smile so much bigger and my day so much brighter..thnx..i needed a smile..:hug:..:hug:...:hug:

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''That which we manifest is before us...''
:iconbob-x:
~bob-x Sep 23, 2003, 10:33:56 AM
:D Are you online all the time? Seems like it. No sooner do I post than I have a reply :)

I'm glad I made you smile. You always make my day a little better to.

:hug:

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~bob-x / aka / Arthur
:icondivisal:
=divisal Sep 23, 2003, 10:36:07 AM
yes..most of the day i am here..lol..this is my second home..:)..:hug: ..thank you..:D

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''That which we manifest is before us...''
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~closedeyes Sep 23, 2003, 11:47:29 AM
oooo im in love wiv this song, i really wish i cud hear u sing it, cus i hav my own lil version in me head now :)
great lyrics :D
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~devilishlycrazy Sep 23, 2003, 12:26:53 PM
this is so good, I wonder what it actually sounds like? absolotuely awseome work :clap:

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normal people worry me :O_o:
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