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VS 1
He left a note upon the pillow where he slept
and packed his things up while she dreamed.
He'd leave her if he didn't love her anymore -
a painful promise he'd have to keep.
He kissed her gently as she turned around in bed
and wrapped herself up in the sheets.
He grabbed his bags and slowly made his way to the door
and as he left he turned around and said...

CH 1
Take care of my old angel please, new moon
and watch over her when she cries out my name.
Tell her she'll find someone better -
someone new instead -
to love her more than I could ever love her in one day.
And  be there if her new loves break her heart
and when it seems her world has been torn apart -
Then maybe she would understand
that I could never be the man
that picks her up whenever she is down
because this time - I won't be around.

VS 2
He took one last look at the old life he had lived -
three years that he could never try to replace.
Thinking back to all the memories they made
as he wiped the tears for her from his face.
She woke up when she heard the closing of the door
and knew eventually, that it would have to end this way.
She read the note and took his picture from the shelf
and as he passed the bedroom window he heard her say...

CH 2
Take care of my old angel please, new moon
and watch over him as he drives away
Tell him I'll find someone new-
and not to worry, he will too -
one who'll love him more than I ever could in one day.
And be there if his new loves breaks his heart
and when it seems his world has been torn apart.
Then maybe he would understand
that he would always be the man
that could pick me up whenever I was down down
but I guess it won't be this time - because he won't be around.
©2004-2009 =divisal
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Submitted: April 14, 2004
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Hate me for the title.
I don't like it either.
I just wanted to get it up.
Wrote this on the 11th while I was just sitting in my room. Listening to the rain on the tin roof outside my window.

Wash my tears away.
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what a pretty song
aww.... I'm in tears babe :( thats so beautiful. :+fav:

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What ever happened to the young man's heart? -Swallowed by pain as he slowly fell apart.

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as I told you once.. I really really like this, and I do think its one of your best. Awesome job, cathy!!! (wowowowowowo!) So, I will fav it, because you really deserve it... go caffy! lol :)

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such a good writer you are! :clap: I hope you find a market for these soon.
thats really good! i can hear it becoming a song... u should consider that! get some music going with it :) its so sweet :clap: awesome

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wow.. im pretty much speecheless...

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great job! i'm gonna fav. this one...i love this one so much! :hug: thank you!

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"Always love. Even when you want to fight."- Nada Surf.
That's a great song! Reminds me very much of my breakup with my old ex from like a year ago, Megan... even thought there was a lot of hurt there and all, we still both just kind of let go, walked away and wished eachother the best. A very beautiful song! You never have failed to impress... but this is one of your best. +fav!

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