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VS 1
Leave the pictures where they fell
Keep your emotions bottled on the shelf
Pick up your clothes, they're by the door
I don't need your empty "I love you's" anymore

PRE-CH
Take with you the burning pain
The time I left you in the rain, only to make you feel what I was feeling
And don't forget the hollow lies,
the mid-day screaming and late night cries
But leave behind the pride that you've been stealing

CH
Don't make me love you,
because I won't
Don't make me want you,
because I don't
I spend these days and nights trying to rid myself
of the scent you left behind
Take all the things you left in time,
all out of sight and out of mind
So turn our light out, I'll be fine
It won't be dark in here tonight

VS 2
I lay my pillows on the floor
cause i can't stand this empty bed no more
I wipe the memories away
You're gone for good and I think i'm better off this way

PRE-CH
Take with you the burning pain
The time I left you in the rain, only to make you feel what i was feeling
And don't forget the hollow lies,
the mid-day screaming and late night cries
But leave behind the pride that you've been stealing

CH
Don't make me love you,
because I won't
Don't make me want you,
because I don't
I spend these days and nights trying to rid myself
of the scent you left behind
Take all the things you left in time,
all out of sight and out of mind
So turn our light out, I'll be fine
It won't be dark in here tonight
©2003-2009 =divisal
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Author's Comments

hee hee...i've been wrkin on this for a few days now..and i finally got it done..dude..songs are so difficult..lol..but..thnx a million to
radius86
&
countrostov
for your advice and your opinion..3 :hug:'s to you both

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:icons15jesusfreak:
Wowee!! :hugs: that's awesome gurl! I'll be waiting to hear it on the radio!! :clap::clap::w00t!:
:icondeviousflash87:
oh my....AHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS MORE THEN ANYTHING ANYONE HAS OR EVER WILL WRITE EVER...AHHHH...hmmm this is great BIG +FAV. :hug: this is great.
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:icontanyazpics:
I really like this :).. the chorus' are great.. again, great job, keep it up!
:iconcountrostov:
Excellent work! Would easily fit to music... Great word pictures. Very impressive sentence structure and punctuation. :) +fav
:icononegurlrevolution:
OMG!!! this is like great..no no no beyond great. yea *speechless* its so awesome :+fav: do u sing...or just write lyrics? anywayz :hug: Your awesome !!!! :giggle:

:heart: Motherz weep, children sleep. So much violence endz in silence itz a shame therez no one to blame for all tha pain that life bringz. If you will just take me it might just complete me and together we can make a stand. :heart:
:iconjadetear:
Nice writing, Suga ;) I love the chorus.. God gave you a wonderful talent, i'm honored to be able to read some of it :hug: +fav
:iconradius86:
awesome. you'll have to play it to me sometime. :)
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